Definitely needs some touching up, and the squeaks are annoying, so at least quiet those a bit. Overall it's a very good idea and good animation, keep going, man.
Definitely needs some touching up, and the squeaks are annoying, so at least quiet those a bit. Overall it's a very good idea and good animation, keep going, man.
I love it! You have a very interesting and cute animation style that goes very well with your seemingly innocent sense of humor. Very good job, sir.
I'm glad you enjoyed the animation style and humor. Thank you! :)
I'd much rather see a timelapse than a slideshow of your progress, this usually gives a sense that the viewer is along for the ride instead of just seeing what happened. Just a note for future reference.
hey I appreciate the honest review. Perhaps this may happen in the future!
The animation is okay, but you know that voice is Danny's not Jon's right?
I know, now.
Animation was okay, I like it and it's pretty good for your first, keep workin' hard.
Hey, I'm Skim Piff, or Brendan, or whatever. There's a lot of things I want to do with my life but all my abilities point my towards doing film. I'm just another millennial who thinks he can do film but will probably end up editing adverts for toothpaste.
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Boston, MA
Joined on 1/13/14