Look, music was nice, but this isn't what Newgrounds is for. Put this on YouTube, mate. Or, just record it and put it on the Audio Portal.
Look, music was nice, but this isn't what Newgrounds is for. Put this on YouTube, mate. Or, just record it and put it on the Audio Portal.
Alright. So, it looked cool.
The thing is it went way too fast to understand anything that was happening, and some things were just out of no where. This could've been fantastic, but, to me, it looks rushed.
Sorry.
Definitely needs some touching up, and the squeaks are annoying, so at least quiet those a bit. Overall it's a very good idea and good animation, keep going, man.
I love it! You have a very interesting and cute animation style that goes very well with your seemingly innocent sense of humor. Very good job, sir.
I'm glad you enjoyed the animation style and humor. Thank you! :)
I'd much rather see a timelapse than a slideshow of your progress, this usually gives a sense that the viewer is along for the ride instead of just seeing what happened. Just a note for future reference.
hey I appreciate the honest review. Perhaps this may happen in the future!
The sprites look good and they are animated very well, but the choice in text really took away from the experience.
I've only the default text that I have in my computer. If there is something I can do about that I would love any info to have more font types that I can have available made to me. Thank you for the advice :)
It's a funny idea, with very poor execution. The animation obviously needs work. Not sure if it being bad was part of the joke, but even if that's the case, it could've been a better joke.
Really good for a first animation, the faces were good and they moved well. Good job, keep going at it.
thank you, I spent a lot of time on it, learning along the way.
The animation is okay, but you know that voice is Danny's not Jon's right?
I know, now.
Animation was okay, I like it and it's pretty good for your first, keep workin' hard.
Hey, I'm Skim Piff, or Brendan, or whatever. There's a lot of things I want to do with my life but all my abilities point my towards doing film. I'm just another millennial who thinks he can do film but will probably end up editing adverts for toothpaste.
Age 27, Male
Student
Boston, MA
Joined on 1/13/14