The beat's good, and it picks up nice, but the female voice could be smoother, it felt choppy, and it came off as annoying.
Amazing, one of the best songs I've heard on this site so far. Great hook, good verses. Fantastic song.
I really like the beat and the lyrics were really entertaining. I'd work on your voice, though, so you sound more confident and strong. For some of the song I felt like you were whispering, like you didn't want everyone to hear it. Get louder, brother!
It's funny that you say that, because my roommate said the same thing. I was actually trying to make fun of how so many modern rappers whisper really lazily in the recording studio. I suppose it wasn't obvious enough, so it comes across as me being lazy. Maybe I'm being too satirical. haha
Thanks for the feedback! It's always seriously appreciated.
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